Chapter 1
Once there lived a boy called Joe. He lived the
middle of the enormous forest. One day
his mum Lily said to Joe “Can you go and get some meat from the shop”. “Of course mum” said Joe. So of he went to the shops. On the way he saw a goblin he said … “come
and have a cup of tea”.
Chapter 2
So he did it was a trap. 4 other ones jumped out. He screamed for help
then 7 chefs came and hurt them so they all ran away. So they planned to move house. So they did.
Chapter 3
From that day on they didn’t
have to walk to the shops. Lucky them. They had lots of money so they bought a
car. Now Joe can go to school. He had a nice new house. When Joe had his first day
of school he made 2 friends. Joe was a
year 5. It was fun at school. So they lived happily ever after.
by Kayden
Great Story Kayden. I liked how you used speech marks to show when someone was talking. I wonder how they got all their money?
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