The Shimmering water at the end of the cold wet sand. The birds are viciously surrounding peoples food desperately squawking for food.
The People running like a bulldog towards the sea to crash into the big the big ferocious waves, while kids build big sand castles and other kids bary people up in the sand. The waves SPLASH into big wet slippery rocks. The seagulls squawking for food, and kids are yelling and screaming at the seagulls and sparrows. It's a very noisy place.
Great describing words Charlotte! Billie
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on your editing before you publish it. Emmy & Astyn