Best sleepover ever and my dad's birthday
best sleepover ever and my dad's birthday
In the holiday my friend Daniella and her sister came over. Me and Daniella had an awesome time. We went to bed at 9:00. It was the best day ever. We had pizza for dinner. Jemma went to bed really early. I didn't want her to go. Now about my dad's birthday. Me, Jemma and dad went to Valentines and it was all you can eat buffet. That's the end now bye.
by Chloe
Fantastic spelling Chloe. You need to remember to describe the things you are talking about. Add more detail - what do they look like? what does it taste like? How did you feel?
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